This is a little story I was working on before I even got on the internet.
I hope you like it!!! I must warn you there is some strong language in the story so if that offends you, read no further. I would enjoy feedback from anyone. CHAIN REACTION Part 1: The Party School was almost out. Lisa Everson was happy and sad at the same time. She would miss the popularity she had gained this year. She had moved here four months ago and was already very popular and dating the Quarterback for the school team. She hoped that her popularity would not go away over the summer. She had been an average girl at her other school and had vowed to become a popular girl when she moved to her new school. She was quickly befriended by a popular girl named Sara Parker. They began to hang out a lot soon after she moved. She went to parties and was accepted into the popular group of people rather quickly. Today was the first day of her exams and she studied her ass off for every one of them. She was very nervous about them because she had failed her exams last year from lack of studying. Sara and Lisa studied all night for two weeks for the exams when a girl named Trisha Robertson invited them to a party on the Friday they got out of school. They quickly accepted and began to help Trisha with the preparations. It was the Wednesday before the party and they were all at school waiting around after school for their grades on their exams they had taken so far. "Oh god I know I failed my Algebra II exam," Sara said slowing her pace as she reached her locker. "That thing was as hard as shit!" "I know," Lisa answered her friend opening her own locker. "But I feel like I studied good enough; I hope." They walked up to the door of their classroom where the grades had been freshly posted by their teacher. Sara covered her eyes. "Well?" she asked still scared to look. Lisa let out a short shriek. " I got a 91! I got a 91!" she exclaimed jumping up and down with excitement. Sara ran her finger along the paper searching for her name and let out a shriek of her own. " I got an 88! I can't believe it!" Just then Trisha rushed down the hall towards her friends. "What did I get?" she asked excitedly. "Hurry tell me!" "Ummmm..." Lisa said looking for Trisha's name. " You beat both of us! A 95!" She grinned widely as her friend also shrieked with surprise. All of them were happy with their scores and all of their party attendances depended on the scores of their exams. They all walked down the hall chatting about the exams and the party and boys. They decided to go on over to Trisha's house and get the preparations for the party. They set up the tables some chairs and put up some streamers. They had called a D.J. for the party so they set up a larger table for the stereo and all the CD's he was bringing with him. Finally they were done but they still needed some food and were setting that up Friday. They sat there and sipped on the Cokes that Trisha had brought them earlier. "Hey why don't we grab some burgers for dinner," Sara asked becoming bored. Lisa took one last sip of her Coke and stood up stretching her long legs. She pushed her long blonde hair out of her face and walked over to the trash can and tossed her empty Coke can into the garbage can. "Sure let's go," she said grabbing her car keys. They always liked to go in her car whenever they went somewhere. She owned a Convertible because she had been saving up since she was 7 and her parents matched the 9,288 she had some how saved up. She had always been good with money. When she was 13 she invested in some stock and cashed in for 4,000 dollars doubling the amount already in her possession. She now only had about 300 dollars in her account at the bank from her recent purchase and had gotten a job at the local mall as a sales associate at Parisians. It wasn't a new convertible, rather it was four years old but her dad rewarded her good money management by getting it a glossy new paint job for the fading car. They all piled in a headed for the local Burger Joint and got some burgers and brought them back to Trisha's house and settled in for a little party. They got a couple of beers as their ritual was after every meal at Trisha's they would have a beer because her parents didn't mind it all that much. As they finished their beers they sat in silence until about 9:00PM and Lisa announced that she should be going. Sara complied and they both left for home. ____________________________________________________________________________ It was Friday night and Trisha's house was packed to the rim full of High Schoolers. From Freshmen to Seniors there was about eighty kids in the large playroom in Trisha's house. Trisha only invited about fifteen people knowing word would spread to the other party members filling the room to capacity. They had refused entrance to some people because they no longer had room for new party members. Lisa, her boyfriend Darryk, Sara, Trisha, and her boyfriend Todd hung out together mostly at the party while other people came up to them and chatted a while before roaming off from them to another group. They sat and talked an had a significant amount of beer, Sara overindulging herself slightly, as Trisha and Lisa cuddled with their boyfriends until Darryk and Todd excused themselves from the party due to curfews. There were still quite a few party members left in the large room. The punch had been spiked four times over so that anyone taking a drink consumed three bottles of rum and a good proportion of tequila. Lisa, just trying to be in the in crowd naturally took a cup and drank it feeling the effects of the stronger alcohol. She decided that was the last drink of punch that she would have and promptly threw up after hurrying into the bathroom. She noticed the stench of throw up already in the bathroom, relieved in knowing she wasn't the only one her with a weak stomach. She returned to her friends rather embarrassed. "I can't believe I did that." she said rubbing her eyes. She glanced at her watch. No wonder I am tired, she thought to herself. It's 1:30. "Don't worry hon," Sara said encouragingly. "I saw a couple of guys rushing over there earlier too." "Yes I know," she commented. "I smelled them in there," she said drawing laughter from her friends. "So did you two have fun?" Trisha asked trying to stir up conversation as she munched on some chips glancing around the room at the remaining party members. She guessed there were about thirty left there still dancing and talking, a few brave individuals taking a dip of the punch and sputtering at the strength of the juice. Lisa answered the question cheerfully. "Yeah I sure did. Except for the punch," she commented offhandedly again drawing laughter from her friends. She noticed a pungent odor as she realized that there was a group of about fifteen girls over by the punch smoking cigarettes and realized that the room was filled with the haze of cigarette smoke. "Hey have you two noticed how smoky it is in here?" she asked quietly. "As a matter of fact, yes," Sara answered glancing over at the group of girls smoking. "What's the big deal?" Trisha asked her friends. "It's a party. They're supposed to have fun and if smoking is their idea of fun then so be it. Besides are we going to go tell Racheal Helmsly and Terry Bonnard to stop smoking? We would be laughed out of popularity forever!" Lisa thought about it and realized that Trisha was right. She wasn't about to give up her popularity just so she wouldn't have to smell a little smoke. "Well when you put it that way I guess you're right" she admitted to Trisha. They sat and talked for another hour and the smoke thickened to where every breath held the scent of cigarette smoke. After a while the moment that Lisa hoped would never come came. Racheal Helmsly and Terry Bonnard, the two most popular girls in school walked up to them, each smoking a cigarette. Racheal was a tall girl with long blonde hair and a quick wit, a little snobby but she was incredibly nice to her friends. Terry was shorter with shoulder length black hair and a great sense of humor. They walked up to the group of friends and sat down. "Hi Lisa, Sara, Trish," Racheal said cheerily to the girls she rarely saw at school. "Hi," Trisha answered in a friendly voice. "Are you enjoying yourselves?" she asked. "Oh yes Trish," Terry answered taking a quick drag on her cigarette inhaling it audibly. "We're having a great time," she said smoke accentuating her words. "I noticed you rushing to the bathroom earlier Lisa. Are you alright?" Racheal inquired taking a long drag on her cigarette and inhaling a ball of smoke appearing on her tongue. Lisa blushed noticeably. "I kinda thought I could take a cup of punch and it kinda overwhelmed me," she said fearing the "I'm better than you" laugh notorious of Racheal Helmsly. Instead Racheal smiled knowingly. "Yes I know it gave me a hack attack myself," she said taking a final puff on her cigarette and crushing it out in a plastic ashtray. Lisa wondered where that ashtray had come from and figured she had brought it herself. She exhaled a long plume of blue-gray smoke towards the ceiling as Terry crushed out her own cigarette exhaling her own cloud of smoke. "Hey Lisa, you still dating Darryk?" Terry asked smoke still escaping her nose and mouth. Lisa nodded her head. "Yeah but he had to go home," Lisa answered. Terry looked up at her inquisitively and Lisa put in "Curfew." Terry nodded smiling. "Too bad for him," Terry said. They chatted a while longer about boys and school and summer plans. Lisa was really enjoying their company and Terry was a great person to be around, always quick to joke about something and always drawing laughter from the other girls. About then Racheal reached for her pack of VS 120's and lit up another cigarette. Terry followed suit and lit up her B&H Menthol. She looked up and noticed Trisha watching her intently. "You girls ever smoked before?" she asked exhaling a cloud of smoke. "No," Trisha answered simply. Sara and Lisa simply shook their heads no. "Well, then would you like to try?" she asked holding out a long white unlit cigarette. Mesmerized Trisha surprised her friends by taking it from Terry. "Good now do you know how to smoke," she asked Trisha. "Not really," Trisha answered. "Well, first of all just take a little drag but don't inhale it just yet. You need to get used to the taste.," she said lighting the white cigarette hanging from Trisha's lips. Trisha applied some suction and removed the cigarette from her lips and blew out the smoke immediately. " That tastes bitter," she said. "You have to get used to the taste," she said taking a drag of her own and inhaling it deeply. "Take another drag." Trisha took another drag obediently and felt the cool taste of mentholated smoke enter her mouth again. This time it was not as bad and she exhaled it into the air. "It does taste better," she said taking another drag and blowing it out immediately. "Now comes the good part," Terry said. "I am going to warn you when you inhale for the first time it will make you want to cough so don't fight it. But I promise you it gets better. Now take a drag and at the same time exhale through your nose. This creates a vacuum. Then instead of blowing it out breathe in a little." Trisha complied with Terry's instructions and took a small puff. Now instead of blowing it out she inhaled it a little and suddenly started coughing. She recovered and started to feel dizzy but she wanted to impress Terry so bad she took another drag and inhaled it. Surprisingly, she did not cough but instead exhaled a plume of smoke through her mouth. "Wow! I did it," she exclaimed taking another longer hit on the cigarette and once again inhaled it. She giggled as a thicker cloud of smoke exited her mouth. She began to feel a little light headed so she put out the cigarette and sat there examining the physical sensations she was feeling. All through this Lisa and Sara stared at Trisha astonished by their friend smoking. They were snapped back into reality by Terry. "Well," she said taking two cigarettes out of her pack and offering them to the other two girls. "You want to try?" Suddenly Lisa was overcome with a sense of intense curiosity. She followed Sara's example by taking the cigarette and allowing Terry to light them for the two girls. An unpleasant taste flooded Lisa's mouth but she kept on drawing smoke from the cigarette and then took it from her mouth determined to do the popular thing and inhaled deeply. She broke out into a hacking cough as smoke poured from her mouth and nose. She became dizzy as her body was not used to the huge amount of nicotine that had just entered her bloodstream. Terry laughed and said "you're supposed to get used to the tasted before you inhale. Especially not that much." Lisa noticed that Sara had not inhaled yet and waited until her friend had inhaled her short puff and was frustrated to see she did not cough." Good girl Sara," Terry said. "You're a natural." Determined not to be left out Lisa took a smaller puff this time and still quite dizzy from that first puff inhaled the smoke. Her body saw this a much more tolerable amount and accepted it without an urge to cough and Lisa was pleased as a small plume of smoke appeared from her mouth. A little light headed she set the cigarette down and enjoyed the sensations taking place in her body. She took one last puff, almost as large as the first drag and inhaled it. She felt a catch in her throat but she repressed the urge to cough and exhaled a large cloud of smoke before she crushed out her cigarette. "Congratulations girls," Racheal piped up. "You have officially smoked your first cigarettes." Lisa felt proud of herself and knew she wanted to do that again. Her chance came soon after that when Terry and Racheal lit up again. "Umm... Racheal," Lisa asked timidly. "Yes," Racheal answered. "Would you mind if I tried one of yours?" Lisa asked pointing to the pack of Virginia Slims 120's next to Racheal's arm. "Why sure. Here you are," she said handing her a cigarette and her lighter. Lisa noted that these were much longer than Terry's. She lit the cigarette and tasted a different taste than the ones she had earlier. She inhaled a large puff and exhaled a large plume of smoke. "Well?" Racheal asked taking a drag of her own and inhaling it deeply. Lisa took another drag tasting the unmentholated smoke. "I like the way Terry's taste but I like the length of these." "Well," Racheal said. "You can get these in menthol too you know. and there are always Capris and Mistys. They both have 120's like these Virginia Slims." Lisa pondered this and decided to buy her own pack of some 120's menthols as soon as she could. The party died at about 3:30 and Lisa drove home and entered her house quietly. She walked quietly to her bedroom and slipped into her bed and thought about tonights events. She decided she was definitely going to smoke from now on but she would not tell her parents just yet. She fell asleep and dreamed about smoking all night long. End Of Part One
Here's part two of my story. This story contains adult themes so if these subjects offend you, then read no further. Any feedback is appreciated. CHAIN REACTION Part 2: Hooked for good Lisa woke up early that morning and walked downstairs for some breakfast. She sat down and munched on some muffins her little sister had made. Her mom was still asleep but would be waking up soon. She got up and fixed herself some coffee, a ritual her father had taught her at the age of 11. Since then she had a cup of coffee every morning before going to school. Of course, she didn't have school today so she sat at the kitchen table and sipped on her coffee for a while. A few minutes later her mom stumbled into the kitchen and fixed herself some coffee. "Hi sweetie," did you have fun last night?" her mom asked pouring herself some coffee. "Yes mom," Lisa answered. She heard a familiar sound and she turned around to see her mom lighting a VS Superslim as she usually did in the morning. All of a sudden, last night's events poured into her mind and she suddenly wanted a cigarette. She watched her mom take that first long drag and inhale it immediately. She sat down and to Lisa's growing frustration blew the smoke right at Lisa's face. Lisa breathed in deeply smelling the sweet smell of cigarette smoke and that made her want one even more. Her mom took another long drag and exhaled it towards the ceiling after inhaling deeply. God, I can't believe I used to get on mom's case about smoking Lisa thought to herself. Her dad didn't smoke but he used to and he actually liked having his wife smoke cigarettes in his presence. He often commented on how she looked great when she smoked when he thought no one could hear him but her. Lisa found that strange and wondered if all guys were like that. Then a thought hit her: what would Darryk think about her smoking. She didn't want to break up with him. She was beginning to fall for him. She decided she would not tell him until the right time and that time she decided was after she knew that he was also falling for her. Her mom crushed out her first cigarette and immediately chained into another as she always did in the morning. She took a quick double pump and inhaled deeply. Lisa was aching for a cigarette by the time her mom had finished her second cigarette. The phone rang and Lisa jumped up to answer it. It was Terry. "Oh hi Terry," Lisa said. "Hey Lisa. Racheal and I are going to the mall and we thought you would like to come. Sara and Trisha are going. You wanna come?" Terry asked. "Boy would I," answered enthusiastically. "Hey Terry. Where could I go and buy some cigarettes? Being underage and all you know," Lisa asked being sure to speak softly enough not to be heard by her mom. Terry laughed knowingly. "No problem. Go to that Shell station over by the Winn Dixie. That's where I get mine. So you've decided to smoke huh?" Terry asked cheerily. "Yeah. My mom lit up this morning and I just had to have one," Lisa said heading for her bathroom. "Well I'll see you at 10:30. Bye," Terry said hanging up. Lisa hungup and dialed Sara's number. Sara answered. "Hi Sara," Lisa said. "Oh hi Lise. You going with us today?" she asked. "You bet. Hey, Sara I need to ask you something," Lisa asked making sure her mom wasn't around. "The answer is yes. I am going to keep on smoking," she said anticipating her friend's question. "Are you?" Sara asked. "Shit yeah," Lisa said. "I am going to pick a pack up at the shell station on my way there," Lisa anwered. They sat and chatted a while as they prepared to go to the mall together. At about 10:00, Lisa left for the mall making a minor course correction to stop at the shell station. She pulled up to the small gas station and walked in. A young looking man stood behind the counter. He looked up as she approached the counter. "Can I help you?" he asked putting down the magazine he was reading which, to Lisa's disgust, she noticed to be a Playboy magazine turned to a page featuring a woman with drastically enhanced breasts. She looked away in disgust and turned her attention to the clerk. "Yes, I need a pack of Capri 120's menthol," she said. She had decided on those the night before. "She hand him the money as she took the cigarettes and her change and put the cigarettes into her purse. She got into her car and put the key into the ignition. She immediately tore open the pack of cigarettes and pulled on of the skinny cigarettes. She examined it closely. It was long and much skinnier than Terry's. She pushed in the car lighter and put the cigarette into her mouth. The lighter popped and she brought the lighter to the end of the cigarette and took a experimental puff noting the taste a little more to her liking. She inhaled the smoke and felt no urge to cough. she replaced the lighter to its slot and exhaled a thick stream of smoke. She realize suddenly that she would need a lighter and went back in and purchased a small bic. She picked up the still burning cigarette and puffed on it lightly then taking a longer drag inhaling the smoke. She had become used to the longer drags quickly and began to like taking in as much smoke as possible and then holding in the smoke as long as possible. She drove the rest of the way taking drags periodically on her cigarette. She crushed it out as she parked by the Parisians doors where she saw her friends waiting. She hopped out of her car and walked up to them. "Hi," she said happily. "We gonna go in?" "Yeah sure," Racheal said walking into the door. "Why don't we eat first." They all agreed and made their way to the food court. They chose a seat and they all went and got their food. They ate their food chatting about their summer plans and all the other things teenage girls talk about. They finished their food and Racheal and Terry immediately lit up a cigarette. Lisa felt a sudden excitement as she reached into her purse and extracted her new pack of cigarettes. "Hey," Terry said. "I see you got your own cigarettes," she said taking a drag on her cigarette. Lisa calmly pulled out a cigarette from her pack and put it in her mouth. She turned the sparkwheel and touched the flame to the end of the cigarette. She sucked hard and inhaled deeply feeling the smoke soak into her lungs. She exhaled the smoke and grinned. "Yeah I decided to try these," she said taking another drag. "Well, do you like them?" Racheal asked. "Yeah. It's the best of both worlds," she said exhaling the drag. Sara finished her lunch and took out a pack of B&H Menthols. She lit one and inhaled a large drag. She exhaled a large cloud of smoke above her head. Trisha had failed to light a cigarette yet and Sara wondered aloud about that fact. Trisha blushed. "I don't have any," Trisha said quietly. "Well here girl have one of mine," Lisa said offered her friend a cigarette. "Thanks Lise," Trisha said taking the cigarette blushing even more. Lisa offered her a light. Trisha took a small experimental puff tasting the long Capri 120 and inhaled the tiny puff. "Hmm...," she said exhaling a small stream of smoke. "I think I like these," she said taking another drag, deeper this time and held it in for a while before finally releasing the smoke. "Yeah they are great aren't they," Lisa commented taking another deep drag. She inhaled it and slowly exhaled it towards the ceiling. Sara piped up. "Those sure are long," she commented taking another drag off her shorter cigarette. "Yeah and that mean they last longer," Racheal said taking a drag off her VS 120. They all sat there and smoked until all of them were through and went out for a little shopping. Lisa ended up have six cigarettes with her new friends. As she drove home, she lit lit her eighth cigarette cigarette of the day. She inhaled that first drag and felt the nicotine do its thing calming her nerves. She crushed it out, half finished as she pulled into the driveway of her large middle-class house. She poped in a breath mint and sprayed a little perfume on her to mask her new found habit. She walked and greeted her mom, sitting on the couch reading and smoking a cigarette. Lisa went up to her room and put down two bags and went back downstairs. Her mom was just crushing out her cigarette as she walked in the living room. "Hi honey. Did you have fun?" she asked her daughter cheerily. "Yeah I did," she answered. "What did you get?" she asked. "Well I got a pair of jeans and a shirt," and a pack of cigarettes she thought to herself. With that she walked into the kitchen and poured herself a glass of orange juice and sat down reading a Cosmopolitan Magazine left there by her mom. She was flipping through the pages when she came across a page advertising for Capri cigarettes. She was suddenly overwhelmed by a need to smoke a cigarette. She just sat there and stared at the woman in the advertisement and felt a wave of envy. She then heard her mom light a cigarette in the living room and smelled the sweet smell of cigarette smoke invade the room. She walked in and sat on the couch and watched her mom smoke. Her mom took a long leisurely drag on the VS Superslim and inhale the smoke. She wathced as her mom let out a long exhale right at Lisa. "Oh I'm sorry dear.....," her mom began but saw the reaction Lisa had by being enveloped by the smoke she had just exhaled. Lisa had her eyes closed inhaling deeply and then opening her eyes and staring straight at her mom. "Lisa, how long have you been smoking?" her mom asked taking a drag. "What are you talking about mom? I don't smoke!" she said nervously. "Don't fuck with me Lisa. How long?" she asked again. Lisa couldn't lie to her mom anymore. "I started last night I swear," she said in resignation. "I don't believe you," she said inhaling a deep drag. "The way you tried to inhale my smoke I know you've been smoking for longer than that." "No I swear to god," she said innocently. "You can ask Sara and Trisha," she said in defense of herself. "I guess they started too, huh," she said crushing out her cigarette. "Yeah they did," Lisa admitted. "Well then I guess you are going to want to smoke from now on," she said chaining into another cigarette. Lisa's eyes brightened. "Could I?" she asked hopefully. "Well you'll do it behind my back whether or not I say so or not, huh," Lisa nodded defiantly. "I guess so," she said exhaling a cloud of smoke. Lisa clapped her hands quickly and ran and got her cigarettes and lighter out of her purse and ran back into the living room. She quickly lit up and took a huge drag, partly for showing off and partly since she was being tortured by her mom's smoking. She inhaled the drag and exhaled the longest plume of smoke ever. "Well, you certainly look like a veteran smoker," her mom commented. "And I can tell by the way you sucked on that thing that you are hooked for good." Lisa thought about that as she took another drag and inhaled it. I guess I am she said realizing that what she had felt was a nicotine craving. She didn't care she thought exhaling a long stream at the ceiling. She like it too much to care about being addicted. After she had finished her cigarette, she ran upstairs and called Trisha, Sara, Racheal, and Terry telling them what had happened. It turned out Racheal and Terry were already smoking at home and had been for years. She felt so much like celebrating so she lit up another Capri 120 and took a long drag and then mimicking her mom took another drag for her first double pump of her life and decided to do that on every one of her cigarettes at least once. End of Part 2
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